fun
this movie is fun to see. it's only a bit bad drawed.
Author Comments
Voiced by Cavia, drawn with pencil, lined with photosuite 95 and coloured with paint.
This is my first flash
Oznedabar responds:
if that's all I should've gotten a higher score, I think. Thanks for the advice
lol. cute xD
Not bad for your first I suppose. If you're going to outline use a thicker line, this one is all choppy and hard to make out. You might get a bit ribbed for your lack of funny..xD...(no offense)....
ALso, make the voices....less garbled. Little hard to make out what tehy were saying. Other than that though, keep it up.
Oznedabar responds:
This was just an experiment, next time I'll use something that's actually funny, and I'll let Cavia do the graphics, so they'll be less choppy. Thanks for the review
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2.75 / 5.00
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- Jan 23, 2009
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