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The Lonely Rat

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just a quick flash i decided to throw together, partly it is making fun of one of my friends we always bug, but partly its just to tell a little story and to lighten your hearts!

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lol he poops at the end!

god damn it brayden! your such a gimp. lolz

Can you actually read ALL of my review this time?

To clear something up, I rated the last one bad for more reasons then the goat. And if I can't understand a character in a flash then something is wrong there so regardless it would be bad.

Now to this one.

I can see you're trying but like i've said in past reviews put a little more effort into your flash. I'm not even going to talk about the art or the animation because that doesn't make a good flash (and it kinda goes without saying)

1 The main plot of the flash was a decent enough idea, but if you put more time and effort into it could have been pulled off right.

2. All of the jokes unoriginal. One thing that makes flash so great is that we can bring all of our own idea's to life (even when you use sprites)

The sylvester stallone incoherence joke is old

that monster joke thing I've seen in many kids cartoons. And the brain tumor joke is clearly from family guy.

I'm sure you could come up with funnier stuff if you worked harder on it.

3. overall it looks like something that could have been done well if you put more effort. I really hop to see a good flash from you that shows the effort you put into it's art animation and most of all writing.

HAHAHAHAHA

Just so you people know, if you don't know the creator you won't understand this at all. But that said this is fucking hilarious. 10000000000000 LOLZORZ

Um...sorry man.

I'll give you credit for the touching idea...but the animations weren't good enough to power that idea. Half the time I didn't kow what the people were saying...
Next time, take more to make the animations look good and try to make the sound clearer. If you can't make the sound clear, just don't speak in it. BUT YOU HAVE GOOD IDEAS!...yeah though.

Sorry, man.

LOL

what the hell!

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Jan 23, 2009
2:23 PM EST
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