its a ok flash i mean the animation could use some work but hey its not a easy task doin lip syncing and having fluint moviemt i just got to say u should have a higher frame rate
It runs at about 24 fps, so I don't think framerate's the problem. I just got lazy with some stuff.
I think that you should maybe add some music in some spots. All the voices sound alike too. But over all it flowed pretty good.
Not bad but the colour and movement was a bit aaahh
but still good
the animation was great and i thought that it was a humourous take on what some ppl actually obsess over
Very funny lol, I liked it a lot
There are only 2 things I can really object to. I woulda loved more sounds, like when he was falling down there stairs or a crash sound when Jay said he didn't know how to stop. And the other thing is the low hum that you can hear when they start talking, idk if you knew about that or have tried to fix it, but if you haven't, a new mic or a nicer mic may do the trick (if you haven't tried that already)
But keep up the good work! Amazing job
Thanks. I really should upgrade my equipment. After all, I only use a $10 mic. If in the unlikely event that I do win that film contest, I'll probably use the winnings on better equipment.
Also, I can't say I'm much of a foley artist (sfx maker) but you're right on the sound effect lackingness. I'll be sure to fix that ASAP.