hahaha

Pretty funny! Great animating!
Keep it up!

well...

for one of your first tries, this isn't bad. Like the others said, it would be lots better with the inclusion of... at least sound effects.

Crosswinds

Ill give you a 5 for trying

It was not bad really. For a FBF it was pretty smoothe just too short. No sound. no story, just seemed unfinsihed but for your 2nd try its not bad

To short...

It's super short, and the lack of sound doesn't help you any.
The animation was alright, but I don't think it's solid enough to be submitted into the Portal.

Not bad

Nice job on the fbfing, and good use of the cookie graphic for your play button, it was short and simple but fun to watch, looking forward to your third.