To say the true, i like it. Good one, and more if i think that you make it to learning how to use flash. Can i join the Club Akatsuki? =3
pretty gd for a 1st try but its not wat i would call newgrounds matterial. soz man
Simplicity is usually the best way to go. Good stuff, man, and it was cute. Yeah I said it. IT WAS CUTE!
Good, but needs some work
It was fun and good, but it need some work. Add walking animations and more motions. It was good for your first flash :D Keep up the work
A good start.
I can clearly see the effort you put in this Flash. There are loads of tweens and it's a lengthy piece. To be constructive, allow me to tell you the two main problems:
- You need to use more symbols. Some characters just slide from place to place, obviously tweened. It should feel more alive, and this is achieved by adding a walking animation.
- The graphics are a bit messy. I think it'd be a good idea to add more detail like a bit of lighting and shading. Try to make it all look natural.