grammar!!

i cant handlez yoor baad grammaz

i liked the dialogue

it is fast and wrote like that but it makes the flash get a little special effect(dunno what is it)
you could get a better history tho ^^

Well......

First let's get the - points out of the way. The dialogue moves entirely too fast. And even if you COULD read it in time, whatever you manage to read....needs script work (not to mention a spellchecker) to make sense of it. The close up of Sonic and Metal Sonic at the end was flawed & there's not much to the "story" of this flash.

Which is a shame because (now the + points) the charas. were very interesting, imho. Especially the two main charas. as I've recognized charas. from Sonic, street Fighter, Naruto, and even Fist of the North Star (I think ^_^). WHO WERE THEY!?! Where are they from, as you don't often see non-Mario/Sonic/Metal Slug sprites? Speaking of charas. it's a nice crossover touch to bring them into the same flash to interact with each other.

Finally Sonic's "zoom" into the forest lead me to believe that the author CAN do a great job of making a sprite flash. The above problem areas just need to be refined. While this isn't Super Mario Bros Z, Sprite TV, Rise of the Mushroom Kingdom, etc., maybe with more tweaking....?

hmmm

not bad, characters are a bit small though, and you could use some Background music, oh and you misspelled chronicles, other that that, you've got yourself a nice little spriteflash.

Very Cool

Nicely put together, good story line build up, Can't wait till the next one comes