I see a lot of potential
I like the writing, the drawings look nice and the voice acting is good. I would like to see a little more animation but it's still pretty good.
So this was made by me and my friend for our youth. We profuisely apologize for the sound quality and lack of sound in some parts. The later installments in the series will be progressively better.
This is his first big flash submission and my first animation with a plot, so please take that into consideration with your reviews.
***EDIT***: It seems I can't credit my buddy, but his NG name is SgtSomeone, and I've tried to add him onto the project. If you know how I can add him as a co-author please PM me...
I see a lot of potential
I like the writing, the drawings look nice and the voice acting is good. I would like to see a little more animation but it's still pretty good.
it wasn't bad
To be honest, i was going to rag on this video until i read you comment, I understand how hard it is to start flash animation, and I commend you on a decent first start. I hope to see improving results later in the series. Keep working hard!