Decent, Sound is a must though
decent job, really depends on how long it took you, but once you add sound, it adds a LOT of depth and makes it feel like almost like a good animation you saw.
Author Comments
An animation made by Grant of the C.J.M. Productions Team
Cjmp responds:
Thanks,
I never really got to the adding sound part...
but wen I saw what you wrote I decided I may do it.
Ok uh this isn't the person who made this but I am a member of Cjm, Grant ( the creator) is going to send me the video to add sound.
good start
just add a story line to it :D
Cjmp responds:
The story line is:
Red dude comes in, gets shot
Blue dude comes in, gets shot
Camera goes to guy w/ gun
bunch of guys come in
They all pull out guns
END
What do you mean there is no story line
:D
Something to think about
I like the idea behind this a lot, but it doesn't look finished. Add a bit of sound to it and try to make it a little less reliant on emoticons (maybe give them faces or something), and you have the beginnings of a great idea. Make it a longer story and give it fabulous animation, and you basically have a Brackenwood story. Keep up the good work, but I can't in good conscience save this.
Cjmp responds:
I used emoticons cus I cant add faces to the small little dot dudes...
No one would see them
but I get what you are saying...