This is just a short cartoon I did one afternoon. I submitted it once and all reviewers said one thing- it needed music (as the original cartoon was completely silent). So I asked a friend to help make a song, and he agreed and came out with this piece which really fits the cartoon. So, I hope you enjoy!
That was above average
Now you can do this. You got to one up yourself.
You have a pretty good capability on story telling but it can be improved on.
I compliment you on the sound capability in story but it can be improved on, by mixing in voices and music, to give flash more panache.
The animation has really good, i don't think it you have advance your artist skills.
Sound 5 Story 7 Art 8 Animation 8.
Hope it helps hope to see another one of your works.
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the animation is simple but sweet, and i like the word games...
i don't know about the moral though... in this world every love is possible...
oh and i cleaned up the mess, do i get a cookie?
Easy jokes
Easy message, nice animation. Come on, you deserve a 6. Maybe if you added voice it woulda been better. I do agree with you though.
I likez it
It isn't bad. I like the story to it. Music was pretty good.
Overall not bad. I wouldn't say to improve anything except make it longer.