That was above average
Now you can do this. You got to one up yourself.
You have a pretty good capability on story telling but it can be improved on.
I compliment you on the sound capability in story but it can be improved on, by mixing in voices and music, to give flash more panache.
The animation has really good, i don't think it you have advance your artist skills.
Sound 5 Story 7 Art 8 Animation 8.
Hope it helps hope to see another one of your works.