the music is good
is only the music. you need get better
Author Comments
Steve and Lenny are two characters I made up a couple of months ago, Steve is a simple and mild character (who has his own flash, see 'Meet Steve') who takes charge in most places and likes to lead the way.
Lenny is his friend (or sidekick) and normally tags along.
When I created the two I decided to create a flash in which they travel to a far off place, in the end I decided to break it all down; Steve and Lenny goes to Paperland is the first a series of five parts that sees them travel to the fabled Paperland.
It is of course already completed and just needs to be uploaded.
I hope you enjoy it, I am currently working on my first flash since signing onto NG :)
Melzaar responds:
you english good
There's nothing here...
I didn't really see any actual animation in this...at all. I don't even know why this is getting a 1. There are so many things wrong with this.
1. It's just a song. I'm not going to even acknowledge that you had to bubble things to represent characters. All this is, is a song.
2. Your "loading" screen isn't actually loading based on if it's loaded or not. You just showed the loading text for about 30 seconds, so that we could watch nothing while it "loaded." The truth is, this would only take 2 seconds to load.
Of course, this is probably a joke, so I shouldn't even be writing this.
Melzaar responds:
joke, haha
no need to make more
this one was not very good at all. it's only redeeming quality was the mediocre song.
Credits & Info
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3.99 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Jan 10, 2009
- 1:20 AM EST
- Genre
- Comedy - Original