NOTE: This is only a teaser of what's to come! The Opening Sequence is still partially unfinished. Voice Actors/Actress wanted!(I do have back-up plans if no one wants to voice.)
The plot: Mismagius died one year ago, and now she want's to extract revenge on her killer!
Who killed her though? And Why? Was it the Receptionist? The Murkrows? Or maybe even it was Gold, the Pokemon Trainer?! She plans terrible things for whomever did.
Mismagius voiced by Me.
Murkrow voiced by My brother.
Music is the Prelude from Psycho.
This is my first serious flash, in whatever way serious applies to any of this.
The animation may not be of the best quality, but I think it looks okay, and the flash's main purpose is to entertain.
Incase you're curious, The Opening Sequence, shown here, is still incomplete. It's missing the following:
Title Text for Gold(Maybe?)
Title Texts for Voice acting(When I know for sure who all's doing voices)
Title Texts for Settings(The setting is a fictional buisness called Honchkrow Enterprises(HKE for short, and the restaraunt attached to it, The Murky Krow)
Title Texts explaining copyrights issuses(Nintendo owns Pokemon and that kind of stuff).
Please leave your comments, so I can improve on my weaknesses, or know that I've entertained at least one soul. Also drop me a line if you want to do a voice or two.
EDIT: Sorry! I probably should've added a Pre-loader and submited it to the Alphas before I put it here!
If it can be moved, that'd be nice. Being my first flash submission, I didn't notice everything the first time.
hmmmmm
Ok good artwork and voices moved smoothly along with the lipsinc. a good teaser but dude ghost type pokemon can't die, they are eternal. I mean you could try and kill it but whats it gonna do turn into a double ghost lol....that would be badass.
This was interesting
~~REVIEW~~
funny character and interesting little animation here, its good dont get me wrong could use abit more backround detail though
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More backround detail and effects aswell
~~OVERALL~~
Strange but decent flash, hope to see the full version soon.
~X~
good teaser
nice use of music from psycho, it matched well with the whole maze thing going on, great voicework too, the final version shoud be pretty cool. kkep up the good work.
Thanks. I sure hope the final's good.
Kind of repetitive
Alright at times, but it just got a bit repetitive, which fis even more noticeable in something short like this.
There were a few problems with the animation (At times the background was pulled to far and you could see white space to the side), but overall the animation wasn't to bad.
I wil admit it was repetitive in the end where we see Mismagius continuously flying down the hallway. I guess I got carried away in emphasizing how long the hallway was. I'm not sure where there's anymore repetitiveness besides that though.
I also know about the jerky animation, and I plan to fix that before I release a final version or a part 1. Was there anything else you thought was wrong?