lol
fuckin RETARDED but i love retarded stuff so a 10
Author Comments
Ok ok, i know its bad but i technically wasn't supposed to be working on it at all, i did it in small intervals leaving it colour less and...not the greatest. I only used motion tween 3 times so excuse the beggining for looking choppy, since i did that all by myself, without the help of the program.
EDIT: AGAIN, I WORKED ON IT AT SCHOOL FOR THE HELL OF IT. I HAVE NO SUCH PROGRAM AT HOME. Just so you know...to make an educated hate statement XD
jaybomonkey responds:
yaaassssss lol
for the lulz.
that actually wasen't terrible. i know it's your first flash, and also i can't realy crituqe, (i compleatly agree with the reply to tigeryoshiki), and i also understand you made it for the hell of it at school. (ps) did this remind anyone of cyanide and happyness?
jaybomonkey responds:
THANK YOU for once, someone read the description. You might be the only smart person on this site man.
uh...
This in itself was pretty fucking lame, however, knowing its one of your first animations I'll forgive you. Also, you spell it "Sunset" one big word.
Well..
Fighting was kinda cool, although you should add sound and color. And the up close shots were disturbing. For being your second animation though, it was pretty good. It is a lot better than some of the other animations I've seen.
jaybomonkey responds:
i went back and seen this just now, and I died laughing. The close up shots were a little more than disturbing, I'll give you that. I still cant believe I even uploaded this, although I am glad I did. So I can go back and laugh at the crazy kid I was 6-7 years ago.
Naw...
I usually like random stuff. Not this one. It's not even funny, just a waste of RAM space. Sorry. :/
Try to do at least a "smooth" animation with more animated FPS and sound.
jaybomonkey responds:
i love how you critique, and yet, you have never made a flash. in order for anybodys critique to mean anything to me is for them to have done a flash (and better)
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2.26 / 5.00
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- Jan 6, 2009
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