good but could be better
try making it a bit more straight
make a better preloader
just my suggestions
Author Comments
A commercial for newgrounds.
by Halo135
halo135 responds:
ok ty :D
Some suggestions
Measure your polygons, the loading bar squares were way off to look like a loading bar.
No change in music, because everyone has unique tastes.
Include Tom Fulp
Have it just go to www.newgrounds.com, and show what the front page would look like.
Choose an Epix Flash to advertise.
halo135 responds:
Thanks for the tip! i'm thinking of removing this and remaking it
Bad
It looks like you threw this together in twenty minutes. I would have seen more to the video instead of just a file being uploaded on the computer. Oh well, better luck next time.
halo135 responds:
:l uh......
thank you?
Loved the...
midi sound track too me back to the NES days bro...thanks for the flash it was cool...I cannot say I have experienced the feeling you are demonstrating in this vid though...as I do not know where to begin to start making flashes.
halo135 responds:
the song is from keatonkeaton999
and thank you :D
average
Definitely average.
its Pretty good i'll give you that
halo135 responds:
ok thank you for your opinion
