Please....

.....make chapter two soon. Loved it.

intresting

its well poot together and is very intresting and the animation is great.

Good but

It was a nice try at something good.
Here is why i think so:

I can clearly see you know how to use flash
But your annimation isnt quite good. You pay to much attention to
backgrounds and scenes while everything else isn't so good.

At a certain moment you have these black things flying on the screen, and i think you try to make it look 'old' that way, but its yust not that what it should be.
And when you close up persons, you don't really have to make them move there heads, but there facial expressions get more inportant, eyes blinking and such.

Its a good start, good choice of music, it did the trick :) and the baby and stuff was really good, but try to work on your annimation, and try not to fake effects if there to hard. Its better not to use certain effects then to use them wrongly or badly.

I hope this helps a bit, sorry for my english, and happy newjear!

sweet

Someone been playing a bit of sega lately? this looks pretty cool, ooking forward to future episodes.

Nice Artwork

I loved the artwork, I do hope you continue to make movies as good as this. The voices were good, it had the makings of a "plot", 8/10.