Awesome oldschool Newgrouns flash.

I love looking at old submissions like this, stuff I would look at with my old account as a kid, at the public library.

Even today, this still really holds up with the humor and animation. It's not as posh as some people might prefer, but I really thought it was done well, even compared to today's standards of flash animation.

Great job, man.

Eh. It's OK.

I don't really prefer the subject matter. It's very crass and rude.

But, for crap, it's executed well. You did a very nice drawing of everything: Thomas, the graffiti artist, and the little kid.

But find a voice actor - or learn how to narrate. Or Both.

Hmmm...

I thought this was an entertaining flash, but it just wasn't delivered in the proper format. The voice acting was alright, but the volume of his voice kept changing. The tone of his voice also didn't help this movie very much either because he just didn't seem to put enough emphasis into it. Overall though, this movie wasn't too bad and it was worth watching.

The only points should go twoards originality

This flash wasn't that funny, we have one-too-many rape jokes on this site and twelve-year-old twats get sucked into shit like this. I did like the way Thomas had graffiti on his side, and I give originality for that. Just find some better material.

FAIL

What are you 12?! If so, I commend you on the animation, but that was just terrible overall.