OK, so this was originally intended for a 12/25 release date. Unfortunately, that never came to pass. I also tried for the last night of Chanukah, but that didn't work either. Because it is now 1/1, I had to remove the happy holidays lines, so my apologies to Saph and Sam. Anyways, my first Alien Boy in awhile, and you'll notice that my art improved since the last one. A lot. Special thanks to all the people who did voices, their names are listed in the flash (even the ones that I took out). Happy new year!
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I just ordered 10. Probably your best flash yet in everything, writing, voice (you finnally got good voices), and of course animation. The only thing you need to do is give your charecters emtions when they talk, and for that matter blink. They always just stare off into space. Keep up the good work and start your next one.
In response to you ordering 10, I actually considered making an actual album, but I don't think any of the VAs would willingly do that, except maybe sonicmega.
Maybe someday. Maybe someday.
As for the blinking, I'll try. I'll try.
Thanks, and the next few episodes will help form a coherent plot.
It's nice to see Snarf finally likes something I made :D
Better...
You came real close to an actual plot there for a second, but not quite. Maybe next time.
Graphics: Nice art, good Japanese style, Selena looks out-of-proportion to me.
Sound: You play a nice guitar. A bit faster on the chord switching is key, however. Voice acting is phenomenal, except for Selena- It's not that the actress can't sing, it's that the quality of the recording itself ain't too good.
Writing: Funny stuff. I've read some of the scripts you've written, and I can't wait until you actually start the plot.
Animation: Fluid and nice. FBF is OK, but the tweening is excellent. Where you fall short is the lip-syncing. Lip syncing needs woik.
Humor: OK, The Rabbi was hilarious. The ad itself is a good parody.
Note to gentiles: The Hebrew text on the bag says something to the nature of "I am NOT friends with Alien Boy."
Etc: Easter eggs were poorly done. Very poor. But funny all the same. I understand Joe is there simply because you want to keep that joke going. That's all fine with me.
Later, man.
The easter eggs were done at about 11:30 on New Years Eve, when I still thought I might be able to finish by midnight.
Not what I expected.
Not bad. Wasn't expecting a holiday cd. The animation wasn't bad, and the same for the voices. I particularly liked the Silent Night part.
I loved the silent night thing, too. One of my friends told me another internet thing already used the joke, but i liked it too much to take out :)
Silent night
was probably my favourite part.
IMO - you need better microphones/voice acting.
Good for what it is, though, and I still have yet to do any voice acting for myself, I suppose, so I can't really critique.
I'ma give you a 7/10, 4/5.