I have to admit that I was not very impressed with this. It's just that there have been so many better Madness flashes. I think my favorite part was probably when the bus (or whatever it was) was heading towards the guys. I guess it wouldn't have been fast enough to move out of the way. The music was pretty nice, though. You really seemed to be better at English than you think.

I thought this was going to be something with mad libs. It's just hard to tell. I tried to keep a body count, but there were too many deaths at one time. I really should do that more in Madness flashes. It didn't need to have so much talking.

congratulations!

your animation is perfect, but who is this guy completely red?

Good one

5/5
10/10
recomm. for Maness collection
keep up the good work.
Mas to dobry.

Ummm....I didn't understand.

None of it made sense. I know it's supposed to be mindless killing, but you introduced a plot and that was that. You didn't enlighten us or anything. All I understand is that there is a universe where people don't get along. Whoop dee doo. And then there's this guy with a...thing...that kills people.

And, I don't know what language you speak, but your grammar is comepletely garbled. Learn the meaning of the words before you use them. Please. It benefits everyone. Either you're not American or not well-educated. That's all.

If I'm being an ass, don't take it personally. I'm trying to help you to be a better author. Your flash techniques are excellent, but your ability to express your thoughts needs work.