need i say it?

its short.
but it looks like pretty good animation at the beginning...
a longer submission would be cool

this is better

i can tell u this for a fact........... that this was better then silent steve preview and silent steve the second preview. But really wat the hell is a big yellow dude that fell offf first thing get up a like have bucked teeth like wats up with that. But i gave it a 9.......... very good

Okay...

needs better graphics and longer story well what is the story

A long way to go

By the way you say rejected, you must have had your previous movies blammed. I would say this movie has a fair chance at having the same fate. But pull your head up. Improve your knowledge of flash. My suggestion would be to get one of the Newgrounds Preloaders, and afterwards learn to make a button in flash so you can give the viewer the option to replay the movie rather than it going again on its own.

And overall, find some other concept to work on. This was a five or six second stick fight, which really wasn't entertaining. Try some other kind of movie. Perhaps a comedy on something, or maybe a flash that has some sort of point or message.

If this gets blammed, then there's no point in stopping unless you strongly feel you need to give up.

Keep practising

Keep working on animation a wee more bit, then advance it to a higher quality and keep on doing it like that, then perhaps add voice acting and such. Good music though, but it is still not ready for newgrounds. Crappy ending by the way, you should not spoof the ending like that, trust me on that, instead just make the winning chap shove is arms up in the sky and make a "Hooray!" or something like that.