Still needs a lot of work
Voice acting was below average, animation was basic, jokes were lame and expected.
You'll need to improve a great deal if you want to impress an audience like Newgrounds.
Author Comments
Hey, this is the first "Misters" movie! This one will introduce characters and throw in some nonsense! But who doesn't love a little nonsense?
Hope you enjoy it!
pawlakt responds:
thanks for the comments, ill try to work on all said things to improve my flash!
Unique
I've never encounted anything quite like this animation. It's original, and slightly funny. Although I really resented the gay joke.
pawlakt responds:
im sorry if you were offended by some of the jokes! but i appreciate the complements you gave!
AHAHAHA
I'm glad I get to rate and review the first of a flash that will probably get huge feedback and get front paged. Great humor and hilarious spin on the children series of mr. men. I look forward to future episodes and I would appreciate a date posted on your page or some kind of message as to when you submit the next one. I am also recommending this for at least a front page if not an award. Great job.
-FMA
pawlakt responds:
thanks! I didnt expect such an awesome comment on this one! I glad you liked it and I havent started the next one yet, so a release date would not be a very good idea on my part! But if you ever want to check up on my current work in progress, there's a page on my website that you can goto...
http://www.pwlk.net/tyler/current_wor k.php
or... you can visit my blog at
http://tyler.pwlk.net/blog/
heh
random original and entertaining ^_^
graphics and sound were pretty good but at one point you moved away from the mic o.O ppl are gonna hate on you for it xD
i wanna see more just for the enjoyment it brought me xD
8/10
pawlakt responds:
yeah... i didnt notice the sound problem until after i posted it, next time i will keep the mic in the same place