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I decided I would submit at least one thing to NG before the year was up and so I set to work on this flash animation, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is encouraged ,enjoy

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Really liked the music!

Though random it is, I rather wacth this than some of the things iv'e seen in newgrounds :P like the colorfull circles to ^-^

all i can say is, I really would like it if you continue'd this.
Meaning like the flash you did now as an intro to something bigger.

>3< but then again thats just some thoughts :P

Random is good

Dark likes Random
Make Moar.

dreaming-loudly responds:

I AM THE LIZARD KING

Hm.

I will say that you have the art part of this down, but the music was so horrible that it brings this right down to a zero. I can't say much to help you improve on this other then to not post this simply because the year is about to end and you want something in, develop a longer animation, cut the crappy music, and possibly tweak the character's lip synching a bit.

Oh, and it was a nice touch to use the tweening option to make the eight circles switch colors, it's a simple and trippy effect that can save things from being immediately blamed, which it might just barely do here.

dreaming-loudly responds:

Thanks for the honesty in your review, I'll most likely submit something better next time

not the best

it wasn't the best idea ever. but i like the little dudes with the arms danceing. that was funny.

dreaming-loudly responds:

yeah those little grey guys were pretty fun to draw and animate

Very good :D

You did a great job with the colors, I also liked how the faces became eyes....very strange, but good. The only problem I had would be that your singer didn't exactly move his lips...he just had a mouth moving up and down, it's not terrible, but you need to give your mouth more character. A mouth should be a character of its own, so that the person watching can read the lips of the person. Very good job though. Keep up the great work :)

dreaming-loudly responds:

thanks for the nice critique, yeah everything needs work but I appreciate the tiem you took to give me some pointers ;D

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Dec 30, 2008
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