You're Sorry

The deleted scene was the only part that made me smile, as I had to force myself to watch to the end to see if it got any better. Maybe other people find this kind of thing funny, but I didn't. I suggest at least working on your delivery, as the attempts at humour just fell flat.

Ok...

Just...work on the animation or something, can't really help that much but...I should have spent more time on it.

i enjoyed it

Yep

I hated

however u get 5/5 and 10/10 for saying ur srry

yeah..

Get a couple of friends to do voices for you, it'd be a lot better if you had more variance from character to character.