Well this is a little something I whipped up within the past week. Overall I'm pleased with my work, although I still believe I should have added the necessary finishing touches, but I decided to submit it in it's pure form and see what people thought, and then perhaps submit a revised edition later on.
The basic plot to the flash is pretty easy to understand, and the storyline is reasonably simple to follow. I've added a few complex traits to a few of the characters, hopefully relating to you, the viewers.
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Please leave criticism/feedback as I'm interested to know what you all think!
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*I RESPOND TO ALL REVIEWS!*
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- Thanks, and enjoy!<3
Where to begin
You're kidding right? A guy flipping the bird while a rap song is playing in the background isn't what I'd exactly label 'inspired'. I really wish they had some kind of quality control on submissions so I wouldn't have to be subjected to half hearted attempts that waste my time.
Thanks for the review, I'll try my best to give you the greatest amount of possible viewing pleasure!
- FL
This flash gave me epilepsy, and crabs.
And I mean it gave me epilepsy, not an epileptic fit. I didn't have the disease before, now I do. Also, since it gave me a big fuck you without any protection whatsoever, I have crabs now. Thanks ever so much.
Thanks for the review, I'll try my best to give you the greatest amount of possible viewing pleasure!
- FL
TLDW;
I thought it was a flash cartoon and I was right.
Thanks for the review, I'll try my best to give you the greatest amount of possible viewing pleasure!
- FL
i understand!
I really loved your characters and thought that the development of them was incredible! I felt as though they could have been my best friends at one point in my life! You're right, the plot line was easy to follow... and boy was it FUNNY!!!
Thanks for the review, I'll try my best to give you the greatest amount of possible viewing pleasure!
- FL
I see no point
The pick was the best part...
Thanks for the review, I'll try my best to give you the greatest amount of possible viewing pleasure!
- FL