It was just "okay"
I gave you a 7 during this review.
Why.
Out of 10
the animation could have been better (minus one)
not much of a plot (minus one)
Oh man it is finnally finished! everything by me including the bad script. This took me forever to put together and edit. Here are the details:
-about a month of hard work.
-alot of sweat, blood, and frusteration.
-over 1200 frames.
-24 frames per second
-and(more than I can imagine)alot of work
Ok here newgrounds is my animation!
ps. sorry about my micriphone it had a glitch.
please comment, and rate with critisism.
It was just "okay"
I gave you a 7 during this review.
Why.
Out of 10
the animation could have been better (minus one)
not much of a plot (minus one)
you mean 8?
Interesting
its a nice idea but undeveloped. Theres allot more I'd do with a dragon then ride it and tie it with a chain to stuff,.. what about terrorising a village? awesome =p!
Whats that about blood going into your animation? Sweat I can understand, perhaps you bled through your sweat pores? Frustration is a common cause,.. perhaps you got little shards of keyboard stuck in your hand from smashing it?
but yeah, back to the point. I cant believe that took a month =D. That kind of quality is lacking for a 30 day project don't you think?
Bright red eyes eh? more info please, and where did all that fire come from, its a small lantern, was there oil nearby? I look forward to seeing plenty of improvements along your road of animation mah friend.
i actually kinda liked it
the graphics are so bad i liked it next time make longer better graphiced version and i think you should start think of a game peace out
bad
you need better sound, plot, animation, and everything else. you need to work hard.
Good effort
I'm sure a lot of people will comment that the narration needed to be louder.
It was a good story, but don't leave it there... What happened to the wild beast? And what happens if another young adventurer encountered the beast, but wasn't clever enough to bring a dragon for protection? Dude, this story needs closure! Get back in there, find out what this beast was, and put it down once and for all, man!
Keep on animating, bro :D