Could be better
OK, story, but you should have shown some of the ending part, even if just simplified.
I would like you to do one really good Redneck Clock animation. One really complete story to develop this character. Something that lives up to your abilities (and gives me something to write about on Wikigrounds!)
The flash was kinda boring. It seems you left out the good parts at the end and left us with the talking lol. Adding the rest of the story in would have prob gave you a higher score.
So instead of showing us the interesting parts, the bits we might actually like to see - you just vaguely describe them and animate the boring parts?
Not a sure fire to get a good score out of me. Sorry.