hahaaa
What the hell was with the monkey in a bottle? roflmao
Author Comments
Thought of this two days ago and worked my butt off to get it done by Christmas
Not bad
Pretty clever, just a little on the cliche side (but what X-mas flash isn't).
hmm.
this is pretty cool, but your character development needs some work. everything looks very tight, giving your characters a stiff appearance. relax them up a bit will you?!!! good job anyways, hopefully your next one will be smoother.