I HOPE IT'S NOT A STRAWBERRYCLOCK MOVIE... I DON'T CARE FOR THOSE.
the animation was fine, the story was almost there, but it was just too short. There was no room for a plot, or a story, or anything. This had a lot of potential but it just seems to have fell through. Keep working though, like I said, a lot of potential
Great music choice, good animation, although the elf was strangely much weaker than Santa, great shot composition. Sadly, this is less like a short and more like an unfinished piece. I mean, there probably oughta be a bit going on with the elf before the scene, a bit in between the beginning and the end, and more after the end. So I'm grading it like a test flash, even if it is intended to be the whole kit and caboodle.