yeah

well it wasnt the greatest but i liked it myself

Okay first try

This was okay for a first try, it showed you can draw somewhat. Like everyone else said make things smoother, and longer. Most fash things have a story line of some kind, if they are not games and even then most have some sort of story line. They may have been one in there, I honestly couldn't tell with how fast it went, but focus on that. It is easier to make something interesting when you are trying to tell something interesting. Music would be a nice addition to your next try, however not madatory. Good luck in the future. :-)

Meh..

Needs some more work...
Your art was a little sketchy (but that is what you might have been going for)
the music was good...
You need to work a little more on your overall story line... More colour, not so fast motion... spend a little more time and effort on your work and i'm sure you will get the reviews you deserve =)

hmmm

well, you have the right idea, for your next flash, focus on making the differences more subtle between each frame, that way it'll appear more like movement and less like a really fast slideshow, also, underneath the timeline there is a small button for onion-skinning, which basically allows you to see what you have drawn in the previous frame to help make your animation more precise. If you need any help with flash or technical advice with sound for flash, send me a PM.

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This is interesting, but I don't really get what it's about. Maybe you could make it longer next time?