heh, shouldhave told you earlier
umm.. just like your newest movie make it longer and give it a damn reason
Author Comments
This is my second flash. It's longer than my first and I think it's a little better. I know I still need to improve though. I hope you'll like it anyways.
here a idea to improve..
STOP BEING LAZY! and make the movie right like the real madness series does.. PUT WORK IN IT!
portaldude responds:
well i know i need to improve. i'm still trying. i think the reason its so fast and short is because i'm rushing and i wanna get it done.
Alright...
Alright while it lasted.....
Way to fast
This movie had no buildup, and you cut it off right at the start. Good but, not that good. Make the next one longer with less random shootings and give them a point like the auditor just goes and kills two people for no reason at all in this.
Somehow short...
well is not bad but by a way is a little confusing the history u made but is not bad try to do it better u can do it
portaldude responds:
Hey man thanks. I will keep trying.