this is great for a first madness vid
all you need is music and to make it long and you can start a series
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Hi, this is the fist madness movie i have ever made i will admit it's not very good but pratice makes perfect and getting the comments from here will jest help me improve ^^ please leave comments telling me what i can do to make it better oh btw sorry for the lack of preloader
killer144 responds:
Thanks :D i have made my V2 of this go look if you like :)
Great...
For your first madness movie, this is pretty awesome...but you could add some music to make it better...either than that, it's a very good flash...do another longer one in the future...
killer144 responds:
Ok thanks ^^ will do
Good.
Your Improving alot.
killer144 responds:
thanks ^^
Oh wow...
Its not Smooth but its still not choppy, the running lacked fluidity and the idea was basic.
There actually wasn't that much to watch in terms of a Madness Movie but the potential is there to make this into something alot better.
The best things i can tell you are:
Improve your walking, a good walk can instantly impress viewers.
Improve your Action, watching someone hold a gun absolutely horizontal for near enough the duration of the movie is bad and really boring.
Add more people cos the more that get killed the happier your viewers will be.
Also the same for adding stylish kills such as doing flips with swords, holding guns in a "cool" way etc.
Get the characters to move as fluidly as you can, static heads and no reaction to weaponry and attacks or anything else for that matter is a real let down for your movie, it makes it looks instantly bland.
And just enjoy yourself, go at your own pace to make sure its all perfect and make sure to test watch it first on yourself and other people to get all the feedback you need before submitting.
Your first one
Thats realy good for your first one. add music and it will be realy good