not bad
it was nice and fluid, so good job, gave me a chuckle.
Author Comments
Unfortunate.
^O^ !
the sound needs a lot of improvement (although i still dont think i could do as good) its funny the animation was smooth and jerk free (thats a first in a quick stick flash!) but it desperately needs to be longer. but you certainly have talent
amusing flash
~~REVIEW~~
Well this could use some improving, voices for one, and some improved character details maybe a better plot, and more detail in the backrounds aswell
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above
~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more
~X~
umm??
I guess it's okay but the volume was too loud and it wasn't really that clear what he was losing
Not bad for 13
You obviously have a good grasp on FBF, and some good body movements.
A very smooth animation.
You have potential. Just keep at it, and maybe try some bigger projects. Maybe even move on the some full body stuff in the future.
The sound effects were pretty lame though.
Give:
www.findsounds.com
www.soundsnap.com
both a try. It will help a lot.
Good luck
evan210 responds:
yeah. i was about to upload it and was like "oh noes! i forgot to add sound!" so i recorded that all in one take in about 20 seconds.