i liked it
The dialog was confusing,Sub-zero was a giant compared to Vegeta and Goku,but overall,i still liked,can't wait for the next one!
Author Comments
Scorpion from MK and his allies created plans to take over the universe of Dragon Ball Z, but they didn't know that Sub-Zero already knowledged about the plans and warned the sayans about that.
GuilderK responds:
thanks :)
that sukd :<
plz try harder good idea :> bad everything else :<
I didn't realize Vegeta is that short...
Like seriously...
I was going to rip into you but Walrickathus beat me to it!
It was pretty hardcore...
So Imma just say that Vegeta is incredibly short.
We're laughing at you, not with you.
Grammar: This made me want to eat a puppy. The errors made the entire story seem like one big joke, with everyone in it played by retards.
Animation/Sprites: Fail. I've tried my hand at sprite work before, it may have been bad, but this was very horrible. It was like trying to drive with a windshield covered in mud. Clean it up.
Story: Just....no. Get to know the characters better, and avoid the blatant references from anime.
"Copy Technique" is fail.
MK using fusion is Fail -1 on a D6.
Overall: Fail
GuilderK responds:
im brazilian...i dont speak very well
well,,,
i love the premise but the subtitles were a litlle confusing. i want to see the rest of the series to see how good you can get, please make more
GuilderK responds:
thanks.... :D