much better
this i much better i carnt wait to see what he dos next.
Author Comments
this is my second flash it took me a while to do but i think it was worth it
comments for improvements for my future animations would be great :)
Entertaining joy!
Great fun to watch, the plot was crazy and mysterious (who was the stranger...?), the sound effects were proper funny and the music... I loved it, the groovy little hi-hat beat was well jazzy, reminded me a bit of the dreamy little melodies and drum fills you hear throughout the Twin Peaks series :D
Keep it up dude, work on fills: try smoothing out your gradients by using more than two colours, and only use radial gradients if the object is spherical/cylindrical.
dan9990 responds:
thx i'll keep that in mind dude
nice
nice job onli problem i think was the music
My ears and eyes are bleeding;
First of all, GRADIENT FILLS?!?! WHAT THE F***?!?!
AND THE SOUND QUALITY WAS AWFUL! If you can't record quality sounds, have someone else do them for you!
dan9990 responds:
ok ur right about the gradient but nothings wrong with the sound at all