Work on that script.
That voice acting and the pace of the flash, it wasn't working that well. I love BIll Murray and I was happy to see that you actually animated a character for him instead of spriting it up crudely. Anyway try to step up the pace of the action.
Well at least it was original. It just wasn't funny and it was boring.
the most oarigional
the most origional, well thought out, well animated Bill Murray week submission ive personally seen. And great effort to. Keep it up!
At first I was kind of disappointed that you used the exact same tone of voice and delivery/character for every single character, but after a while I found it exceedingly funny.
I still think you might experiment with having Bill done by someone else, or with an entirely different voice/character, more pizazz, anger, or that sort of thing, so that it plays well with every single other character which would be done by you with the same uninterested, monotone, etc.
the voices... oh the Humanity!!!!!!!
theyre all the same, adds to the funnyness. (god hopes you were aiming for that.)