Okay, this story is about NeroGeist, a fresh drawing for newgrounds.com.
Note: this is my first flash movie so its sort of short and the animation is sort of amurturish.
lol...
sounds are there and others are drawn in.. lol..
And its like theres just stuff going on in floating air.. maybe make a ground insted of just a white backround..
If your gona put something on here it should be a reflection of your talent.. and all i see in this is that your lazy.. You have some skill but your just not useing it all.
thanx for the info! I'll make sure work harder on the sequel!
Hello NeroGeist
I see geat things in your newgrounds future.
its kay
its okay i guess although i guess you should add sound to more spots like when he falls, or when there were the spikes you could have made the gleaming sound that is used in some shows...but other wise good job and hope to see more from you dude
Nice!
That wasn't bad for someone's first Flash submission!
good!
it was good for a first! just try to make it longer with more sound and it will be great! :)