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Trying to get back in the groove of some traditional animated shorts. Starting off with some easy stuff and work my up form there

I plan on making all my short 10-20 seconds long and with out dialogue so I can finish them quickly

Animated in flash cs3 using the god sent Cintiq 21ux at 12 fps

Took a few hours over 2 days to complete start to finish

also please criqtique my work all comments welcome
thanks for watching :)

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KFC So good.

its okay for a short

its okay, the animation was reeeallllly great, but i seriously think there should be some sound


made no sense at all and wasnt even interesting
i guess I'll give you a 1 for trying

Excellent cartooning

and very well put together, but it's too short and has no sound. Deifinitely a nice piece though, I can see from your author's comments that you plan to continue and make 10-20sec flashes. Might I suggest you release sets of four or five of them together, rather than just individual ten second long flashes. Other than that Great style, very fluid quality, looking forward to seeing what you create.

Shawntate responds:

Thanks alot El-Syd for the review. I agree it is pretty short, I do have a mini series that i have been putting off for some time now thats similar to the old tom and jerry cartoons. I plan on putting out the first short the end of December or early Jan. Im going to go ahead and bite the bullet and go for a 60 to 80 seconds long.