please read!
One kid is in detention and wants out he will do any thing to get out. Like even bringing a sword to school. He is getting out but it will not be an easy task
That was amazing
The plot was just awesome. Graphics and whatnot amazing, almost as good as say, a PS3/ XBOX 360 game. Only problem is the animation was horrendous. Instead of the guy moving, he just floated or something across the floor. Same problem with jumping. But, I'll act like a lame person on Newgrounds and give you a ten, just like where they'll ten something even if it's "okay".
i think it was better then any ps3 game in quality. i believe this should be a front page movie because of its awesomeness and outstanding excellence.
PS YOU CAT AVATAR OWNS ALL
.....yeah
Pros
A preloader!
Cons
Terrible animation
No sound effects ( apart from a soundtrack that doesnt even fit the story)
No Bg artwork
To be honest with you, I wouldn't be suprised if this was made within a day.
And what's with there being students in the sky? ( when the guy shoots in the air).
Anywho, I hope you'll improve your work to a presentable standard , and not a repeat of this.
well i kinda did make it in a day....... and really don't know why students are in the air just thought it would add in on the chaos. i started the other one but haven't spent much time on it because i have not felt like it. also is the preloader the only good thing?
hey not bad
Everybody has their bad posts and their good posts. They get good feedback to make it better and BAM! Your a popular author on newgrounds with a great series. The animation wasnt half bad, music was great. I think the only thing you need to work on is your animation. Dont worry, you'll get there soon enough!
thanks i am making a second and taking way more time on it than this one. And i still am fairly new to flash or not but haven't made to much .
hmmm....
i will belive this was yourfirst try and i have to say its ok to be the first try.
thanks im trying to improve
Lol
The idea works but the time and effort you put into it dosn't. You should put more time into what you do because people like it that way. =) keep trying. work harder.
well i am trying
