that was great, it's a good show of coordination between your animation and your audio. Loved the ad btw, ever think of marketing?
Haha, thanks for the review. I have thought of marketing, but not because of this xD.
it was well made
yeah, it was well made, and you have some good flash skills. it was just so uninteresting.. I couldnt tell if it was meant to be a serious ad or a comedic take on the generic lolly brands of today, either way it was fairly bad.
In summary, you movies would be awesome IF you brainstorm ideas on what its gonna be about ALOT beforehand, and test the story on some friends to make sure it works. This would have been good if it was funny.
But, don't take this too harshly, like I said, it was well made, and it's definately worthy of making it through into newgrounds.
Thanks for the critique. I'll take that into account in the future. Like I said it was one of my first animations and I never really planned it formally. I just worked out of my head.
I see its your first animation, so i'm judging it nicely. I actually had hope, that some kind of alien will jump off his stomach...
I'm sorry, I didn't think having a alien jumping out of someone's stomach would really sell the product. This was actually meant to be a proper ad for a school project.