nice
good job also the humor was ok but i cant wait to see the another ep.
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i know there are a few glitches but its my first flash series. so just enjoy the comedy instead of nit-picking at the animation
Good work.
Nice job, menten5. The humor was solid, but you could use a little help on the animation and spelling. Other than that, I liked it a lot. Keep working at it, I'm sure the next one is just as good.
:D hahahaha!! :D
the last parts were funny as hell!!!
cant wait for another one!!!
GJ! 5-5 10-10
Omg we're going to hit the ceiling!
although the graphics weren't that good, the flash was funny and all the short parts came together in the end, the intro was good too. this is much better than work I've seen of more experienced flash artists. also, keep on practicing
Something helpful
Throughout your flash, I felt like there was no point to the episode at all. What are you trying to tell the viewers through this flash? I saw random conflict with sprites, which didn't go together or really make sense. Next time really sit down and come up with a stronger storyline, instead of random stuff happening for 2 minutes.