not that good
alright animation, but needed more imagination.
try a storyline, cos you have talent with animation, but i dont see the animation being applied well. cos, cmon, its just shoes being drawn, not a good newgrounds submission
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A little something I made as a school project
I'm hoping for a 3 or above, I never got anything higher than 3.05, and i worked kinda hard on this one.
(sorry for the image thing, im working on it as you read this)
As a shoe am I,
Textured with flesh.
Worn where I lean,
Oft without polish,
But never unclean.
I rely on my sole to carry me through,
All of my other bits rely on it too.
It withstands the hardships of any weather,
Has taken its beatings more than the leather,
It remains unseen until I look,
Reassuringly there 'neath each step that I took.
not that bad
the storyline ins't realy good but this is not that bad.
Didn't impress me.
That last design looked a lot like your generic tennis shoe.
I'm sure you could do better. School projects typically make for crappy Newgrounds submissions. Something with more purpose would be nice. Something funny or with a story, not just random shoe stuff.
hmm..
well the beggining could have been a bit better and there could hvae been more designs, but good job dude
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