This was notbad
you have raised the bar dramatically with everything that has been going on in this flash entry, There could be some better stuff and the way you did stuff better Utilised with the way it was presented, But honestly with all Criticisms a-side This was acually pretty decent and i had some good fun with this, so I was pleased with how this cameout. This was a decent flash and I like the concept of a spider and whatnot the other office people are funny and some of the jokes are pretty good aswell. Now this was something kind of different but thats actually what I have enjoyed about it, Now ofcourse its the ending now, But I can really see you building onto this As this was a decent piece of work, but anyways best of luck to you.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its always good to be Prepared and while you dont need a Makeover on this flash but as a Bonus there could be some slight improvments, No this is not perfect, but what it does have is some good potential you do have a few things you can improve on, and all it takes is a few more ideas to run with, so here are a few. Maybe adding some more sound/fx with the action scenes, more music that changes up when in action scenes aswell.
Thanks! It's been a long time since I worked on an Office Spider. The character ended up on the Newgrounds banner at San Diego Comic Con! I met Tom Fulp and attended SDCC. It was awesome. Since then I've been making my graphic novel series, which you can read at http://www.verdacomb.com and I also have a second graphic novel series here: http://www.tofuzilla.com! One day I may make a longer Office Spider that covers most of these ideas, except with better animation of course- and original music. I appreciate your review! You can also check out music for my comic here: https://soundcloud.com/entergalacticdj
has it really been 6 years damn time flies.
Indeed it does. Dude you should check out my graphic novel. www.verdacomb.com or www.facebook.com/verdacomb Issue 1 will be available March 1st on the official site and facebook store! I've been writing it for 5 years and now have begun the first book, which will have 16 chapters!
lol thats funny i like it ( even though spiders creep me out)
I would love to see more office spider plz
i injoy it so much
ITS Hilarious YOU ShOULD CONTINUE it. seriously! I LOVE IT!!