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a paper and a pencil

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A young monster finds a piece of paper, not to know there is no pencil to use it.
My first submission.
I dont expect a perfect score on this.
Please review with helpful critisisim.
remember to eat slugs for dinner! (:

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Not bad

Not bad for a first submission...kind of weird music, but it fit the movie

I enjoyed this

great

amazing! I love the style.

non male! :P

meaning: not bad! :P
even though i would use layers if i were you too scratchy maybe? i loved the storyline.. simple and nice!! keep the modesty ;D we have waay too many over-reacting exaggerated flashes here on NG, we also need clips like yours to make it complete! :)
signed, the Italian Chick

Alright

For your first flash this was pretty good dude, keep it up!

Brilliant for a FIRST!

This amazes me. Good job on first submission.
But advice:
Less scratchy, use layers.
ASLO:
PENIS
A-S-L-O

Credits & Info

Views
5,321
Votes
7
Score
4.14 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 11, 2008
4:46 PM EST
Genre
Experimental