ugh

This might have seemed like a good idea in your head, but it was not well executed.

Good but...

You should use voice actors instead.

Have different camera angles.

Write a better script.

The "weapons" used were funny along with their sound effects.

Ehhh....

Well, I didn't like the idea of the movie...

Your voice sounds like a kid's voice (well, that's cuz ur a kid)... you should get someone else to make the voices for you.
You should also try not to make the video on your room (or whatever), it looks bad having your room as the background.

And PLEASE add a preloader. It's not that hard.

this isnt a flash

but still its decent and i hope you pass the judgement because the origanality of the movie, but i cat give you more than 3, you movie need more comedy a beter script and more voices.

i sorry for the grammar, I live in Mexico