Your good
I'll give it a 9/10 cause I know its hard to use that program but you have gotten use to it. And I love the DBZ sounds they sound great. Just keep trying and like make another one of the Revenge 2 or something and add more frames to make it smoother and take your time. It doesn't have to be done over-night, it has to make people want to expect something from you again and again... Nice try..