lol

my buddy is just like that fucking noob

Cool but...

For me, it didn't have that much content...I mean, it's about a guy sniping people and I think you forced some swears...

Lol

That Was Hilarious These Nubs Obviously Don't Know Comedy When They See It

A Good Attempt

Dude, honestly it was a pretty decent flash for a "flash noob." The graphics weren't the best, but it was good enough to the point where it really wasn't a problem, which is usually the telltale sign of beginners.

I would've gave this flash more stars if only the audio was better (mainly the voice acting). Reading the response to WraithAscendant, I know you've used Audacity. However, if you plan to make better quality flashes, either get a better mic, get voice lessons (for speaking in different voices), or use an AutoTune-like VST for Audacity.

All in all though, the flash was pretty good. The length of the flash didn't feel too short, since it was a basic plot that everyone can relate to. The graphics were pretty nice for a beginner, but like I said the audio could've been better.

Keep up the work and maybe one day your flashes may be so magnificent that it reaches the NG front page!!!

Good effort

While I think you put in a good effort, I have to agree that you need to improve particularly voice acting. You can use Audacity to modulate you voice if you have no one else to act. <(^^,)>