gud and funny

i like this i meen a pencil i would use a nife lol keep it up.

Good

Good for your first time, Sounds were quite good and humour was pretty good too, Animation was a bit lacking but it all comes with practice.

Keep on making movies dude,

-Anarchy

lame

sorry but I really hated it. It was all wangy and demented and out of place. Half the time you couldn't really understand what was happening. We dumb people just can't catch on, you know? Like mans in the couch, then he answers phone, evil laugh and strange sound then some guy just barges in while the man grabs a pencil to defend himself. Kinda hard to take in.

That said, I hope this doesn't get blammed so I can see the sequel.

rushed you say

don't submit a rushed product and expect kind reviews

Why not improve it?

If there is a pet peeve of mine, it's when people say, don't expect much from this, I know it's bad. If it's bad why submit it? If you know you can do better, do better, don't waste our time with a flash you don't expect to do well. If you submit something on newgrounds, it should be showing the best of your abilities in the hope that people will like it. Do not show us something you think is rubbish. Show us something you can be proud of, otherwise it doesnt say much of you as a flash artists, and just ticks me off.