haha
lmfao! x.x laughed at end, had a real cartoony feel to it ^^ from the soundfx, and yea a deeper story line etc would def be good
Author Comments
Well, this was a request by my friend Tim. I decided to do it. Don't think it'll pass judgement though. Oh well, who knows, it might make it for some reason. :D
Just give it a few seconds to load, considering the lack of a preloader.
EDIT: Wow, NG's gotten generous since I first started here.
Roxasaurus responds:
Thanks. Compliments = Good.
Check the response below for an in-detail response.
0o!
Lol'd...I enjoyed the paper background effect but it was a bi short and didn't seem to go anywhere - I guess I should learn to read titles better :P
I don't believe it passed judgement either lol (no offence), but hey. Possible critiques:
1) Way too short.
2) Um, story line/flow/anything happening at all :P
I have to admit I loved the sound effects you put to it tho - especially the final popping sound...Perhaps draw a bit more complex story out of it in a repost of a developement on this idea (I have a few ideas on story expansions if you have the time/wanna hear them).
Ciao
Roxasaurus responds:
Sure, PM me some stories. This was based precisely on a request. The request was that a guy walks on, randomly takes a pill, washes it down with water, bloats, and blows up. Hell, the requester even said to do the balloon pop. Anyway, tanks for the critique. I guess I'll listen to the expansions if you want.
-Roxasaurus
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Okay......(the eight for good animation...and making me feel like i on crack....am i?...)
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Me Neither.
Roxasaurus responds:
I guess we were both wrong.
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