not bad
ive actually had a similar experience. good animation and story, but it could use some sound effects or something to excite the scenario, maybe background music.
Author Comments
It is a short film with simple character and background design with a simple plot-line. The effect gained from the performance is comedy.
Good animation
Not so good sounds.
Sound synch
Very good drawing... the art was interesting! The clock breaking was too two dimensional and the sound was a little off... you could try varying the sound samples you used (the scream kind of got annoying quick). But this was a very pleasant flash to watch!
P.S.: don't use the constant loop and leave a replay button for that...
Heh good.
Watch Friends much? LOL
Good
Imaginative storyline that goes along with the style of animation. Although the audio seemed out of sync, and the commotion she was trying to make seemed sluggish. This was truly great, I can see the amount of work you put into it and and for that I give you a well deserved 9.
You should try and push yourself, I see allot of potential here.