This is just a piece of madness i created with a 30-day trial a while back. It doesn't have any sounds, and my trial crapped itself before i could write "to be continued", but yer......oh well! ^^
Enjoy! :D
lol!
i laughed so hard at kill 9
throws the gun into a guys head. HA sorry that made me lol.
any who it was ok? i mean ive seen worse from NG but
the animation was very choppy, like when he would be doing multiple actions, he parts would just freeze, needs to be done a little more smoothy
2/5
5/10
Stiff, and choppy, but not the worst I've seen.
Ok well for starters, it was stiff, choppy, and badly animated. You didn't animate the bodies at all, it was just the hands. You basically had walking statues all over the place. Add in some rotating of the body while falling and shooting, and don't animate the head along with the body, give it a bit of bounce in occasions, and you'll be fine. Okay so after like, a few more rooms, you see the guy with the grenade. Um, several issues with this. For one thing, wasn't the grenade thrown at him? If so, why didn't it explode? I noticed that the pin from the grenade wasn't taken out, so that must have been the case. Okay so he throws it in a room, but then it gets thrown into another room. Well, give your guards a sense of intelligence, they should have thrown it in the room it just came from.
But anyways, this was a really bad thing that you did. You made an explosion, but it wasn't shown, and when he got to the room, it was just a bunch of bodies laying there with bullet wounds. Well, it would have been better to actually show this, rather then just pan to it, and not be so lazy. And also, explain to me how a grenade gives bullet wounds.
Well that's pretty much it, however, I'm very surprised with you.
You used the correct hands.
You see, normally people don't use the correct hands, they either have two left hands, or two right ones or they're just all messed up. I'm so glad that you're smart enough to know your right from left, and for this, I respect you.
Plus the animation wasn't the worst I've seen from a beginner, just add more animation, with the feet and body and stuff, and you'll be fine.
okay
it was okay, but it would have been allot better if you added some sound to it.
Average to good.
Nothing new under the sun, as always :) It would ahve been better if you had added some sounds, and some music. As it is now, ppl can only vote for story and animation. Story was non existent, but the animation and violence was kinda nice. Keep it up, but add sound and music...