Cute Movie
Now here is something with some good appeal and some decent Potential to even go further then it is now. Though the rest of the animation was mostly fine, and shows off the artists animating skills aswell as bringing some artistic value to it, it sorta keeps you on your toes with everything going on, and that was all on the plus side of things. Haha this was cute and amusing I reviewed one of these earlier and it was pretty good as is this one and you bring some good effects and a good lil story aswell as being a cute flash. with a few more adjustments and fixer ups it could be much better and even more popular with a larger group of people to enjoy, but anyways it was a decent flash, hope to see some changes for the better and even see this get even more popular then it already is, I Enjoyed your presentation and look for more of your work soon. so keep up the quality and keep up the effort in your work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Converting some ideas here and there with no Trade-Off is always a good idea. And so its the simple ideas that seem to make things work best, And I hope you can use some of these simple yet successful ideas, It will be a plus to your work and this project. I would think about making these shorter since you have like a series of flashes here.
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