Well......
This was.....eh.....short......but good, cause it was bloody.......................not so epic..............................ok.
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This is the first movie i pruce, very short, and not even almost finished ...yeah enjoy .
Not a bad start
If the flash is not finished, I advise against releasing it. What you have is a good start though. For a first animation, this moves really well. Animation is fluid, even though the art is rather uninspired; being stickfigures and all. Sound syncs up well until the very end, where there is no sound at all.
Hopefully you'll carry these animation skills over and put them into a story with your next flash. It would be great seeing these guys bounding around with a purpose, rather than just beating each other up for the sake of beating each other up.
u-tensity responds:
Thanks, I really need the constructive critisism. I'm finishind this part and I started the second part now, I didn't know that releasing would be like this...lol.
I'm from spp and the animaytion didn't upload there, and I thought uploding in NG will automatically install a preloader.
Not a bad start.
just keep going with it, yah dig?
u-tensity responds:
I dig.
its a good start, good luck
its a start to a decent sick fight
u-tensity responds:
Thanks!
hmm short but good.
very short, the play button took awhile to work, but still good.
animation = 10
length -1
play button fault -1
that comes to 8/10, 4/5.
u-tensity responds:
Nice calculations there but I thought the score is almost an avrage of all, 1+1+8 =10
10/3= 3.3 which is low...
Thanks though.